Comments on: What Is The Record For The World's Longest Fingernails http://www.weddingcometrue.com/what-is-the-record-for-the-worlds-longest-fingernails/ Fri, 30 Dec 2011 05:25:07 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Kevin http://www.weddingcometrue.com/what-is-the-record-for-the-worlds-longest-fingernails/#comment-186 Kevin Fri, 12 Mar 2010 09:58:21 +0000 http://www.efingernails.com/?p=664#comment-186 The comment window omitted the changes I suggested. Change feels to uses. Change very easy to much more easily. Change mush to much. Change husband which to husband who. Change of Alzheimer to with Alzheimer's. Best regards, Kevin The comment window omitted the changes I suggested. Change feels to uses. Change very easy to much more easily. Change mush to much.

Change husband which to husband who. Change of Alzheimer to with Alzheimer’s.

Best regards, Kevin

]]> By: Kevin Freitas http://www.weddingcometrue.com/what-is-the-record-for-the-worlds-longest-fingernails/#comment-185 Kevin Freitas Fri, 12 Mar 2010 09:54:50 +0000 http://www.efingernails.com/?p=664#comment-185 Very interesting, thanks. I think the following grammar and syntax changes make your writing stronger. But the best part is that she (feels) her hands (very easy). and can do things much (mush) better. manages to take care of her husband (which) is ill (of Alzheimer). Very interesting, thanks. I think the following grammar and syntax changes make your writing stronger.

But the best part is that she (feels) her hands (very easy). and can do things much (mush) better.

manages to take care of her husband (which) is ill (of Alzheimer).

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